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#1 tirano

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Posted 19 March 2017 - 06:10 PM

Hello look my first creation in this world with PhotoShop :


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#2 FrozGR

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Posted 08 May 2017 - 10:08 PM

Looks decent to me..  Not really sure about that red variation on the font but the font and the background plus the style looks awesome.

#3 Adzzy

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Posted 09 May 2017 - 03:01 PM

You never really want to use a red or dark colour on both a dark and light background, the best way to counter contrast a light and dark background is by using an even lighter colour for text. The flow is way to think as well, tone that down a little.

#4 Bucks

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Posted 20 May 2017 - 02:17 AM

Ooh I like the space theme a lot 10/10 sir!

One small critique I have is try finding the font named Orator Std and using a white font color and outer glow for the text perhaps?
(if you do this by chance, please post back. I'd love to see :P )

#5 TwisterR

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Posted 18 June 2017 - 07:52 AM

The combination of the background and the texture of the font was not cool. Try a darker background (the background with trasnparency to black, dark gray) with red, I think it would look better!

#6 aymilo

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Posted 20 July 2017 - 06:14 AM

For your first creation it looks nice but in my opinion I would take out those lines doesn't really suit the atmosphere.

#7 tiosleepy

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Posted 23 July 2017 - 05:28 AM

I think you should use a softer text, i don't know .
I mean it seems too much in contrast, like its jumping at you .

#8 KeNoN

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Posted 30 October 2017 - 09:50 PM

You need to learn more PhotoShop :D ! For the begining it look great !

#9 Jimmy119

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Posted 01 November 2017 - 04:15 AM

Hey it looks better than anything i could ever do, damn good job. Best i could do it some shite comic sans text

#10 kaska59

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Posted 03 November 2017 - 01:55 AM

well you need more working to do and more learning, in time you will be better than that

#11 TiredGiraffe

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Posted 05 December 2017 - 06:02 AM

A bit simple maybe watch some tutorials but looks alright for a first piece of art. good job man!

#12 ollelarsson

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Posted 06 December 2017 - 02:04 AM

I think that you could try to make the text a little more easy on the eye..
I mean, maybe no or very little shadowing on text.
Maybe change opacity to make it look more unified..
Sorry.. my english is not the best!




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